Within our final video I feel there were a few criticisms to made, about our pre-production and how things planned out over all. For e.g. things like, the lighting of the video, the speech or lack there of and the timings of the video.

The lighting was far to dark in some parts of the video, this had an effect on what our auidience could see and it also put a dampner on the horror aspect because it did not make the video as scary as we would have liked. The lighting was crucial to seeing elemnts of our short video and in future we are going to have to test the lighting better because it is such a delicate thing that is easy to get right and it has such an impact on the final video.

The speech, or lack there of. We did not plan to have much speech at all however the word ‘hello’ did not come out correctly and also had an effect on the finial video because it did not show the upset/scared character that we had planned to have. I think in the next video we make we need to allow more time for things to go wrong and therefore we have the right amount of time to change these things that go wrong at last minute.

The time limit we had was 40sec, our video was 40seconds long, however I believe that the plot line we came up with was to complex for the time we had been allowed. Therefore we could not fit in all the detail that we had filmed to keep it within the 40 seconds, I therefore feel that next time we should have a plot that is more simple to abide by when filming. The changes we made to the original plot also had an affect on the time allowed. As we were filming we decided to make changes to our plot by adding in more detail to certian parts and taking other things out. Therefore I feel as a group we should spend more time planning and thinking about the plot and making any changes before hand; so when it comes to filming we have a plot that we are 110% happy with and can be followed, without the need for changes.